Saturday, February 21, 2009

Second Draft of Descriptive Essay

Each cookie has a unique smell, appearance, taste, and feel. Some have chocolate, some just have sugar on the top, and some have oatmeal. The Oatmeal Cookie is a wonderful cookie, it is better then any other.

As the cookie is baking, it lets off a wonderful smell of brown sugar and cinnamon mixing with the oats. When the brown sugar and cinnamon heat up they really allow their fragrance to come out and leave your house filled with a sweet smell that everyone will love. The oats being cooked, while they heat up in the oven, brings a smell that lets everyone know exactly what you are making.

The cookie has a beautiful golden brown color. The oats stick out in every direction and make it look like little mountains and valleys over the whole cookie. The raisins stick out just enough for you to know they’re there. And if you desire to put nuts and chocolate chips into the cookie, it makes them have a more full look because of all the additional items.

The taste of the cookie is a mix of brown sugar, white sugar, butter, and cinnamon mixed together with oats. The different types of ingredients so beautifully combine together to make a wonderful taste of sweetness. The oats bringing a nice natural taste to the cookie. And finally the raisins give a nice fruity, freshness to the cookie.

The outside of oatmeal cookies feel rough because of the oats, while the inside is soft. As you bite into it, it has a chewy texture that is just right. The cookie almost melts in your mouth. It has a warm feel as you eat one the way you are supposed to, right from the oven.

This cookie allows a variety of flavors depending on the recipe that you use. Some may put in nuts and raisins, while others may just add chocolate chips. Still some might make it with no additionall items, except the oatmeal. The ways to have an Oatmeal Cookie are endless.

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