Friday, February 20, 2009

First draft of my descriptive essay

Filled with oats:

      Each cookie has a unique smell, appearance, taste, and feel. Some have chocolate, some just has sugar on the top, and some has oatmeal. The Oatmeal Cookie is a wonderful cookie, better then any other.

      As the cookie is baking it lets off a wonder smell of Brown Sugar and Cinnamon mixing with the oats. When the brown Sugar and Cinnamon heat up it really allows its fragranceto come out and leaves your house filled with a sweet smell that lets everyone know exactly what you are making. The oats being cooked while they heat up brings a person to crave oatmeal cookies.

      It has a beautiful golden brown color and you can see the oats sticking out in every direction.

     The taste is a mix of Brown Sugar, White Sugar, and Cinnamon mixed with oatmeal.

     The outside feels rough because of the oatmeal oats while the inside is soft and chewy.

     You couldn’t ask for a better cookie. It gives sweetness while giving a wonderful taste of perfectly cooked oats.

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